Choosing a subject to photograph for this assignment wasn't as simple as I expected it to be. Given a choice of "anything you like" does tend to flummox me a little. In the end I chose something a little challenging. It isn't physically possible to walk around this subject in it's entirety but I knew most of the angles could be covered. The almost due east/west directions of the two facades made it possible to get decent early and late light, given decent weather. I wanted to collect all the shots with the Olympic Rings in situ, but given the times and weather encountered, to say nothing of the effect of tides made this impossible. However I'm quite pleased with the result and I'm hoping it does fit the brief.
Image 1 Sunrise / COLOUR |
I wanted to capture the early morning light from the north direction. In Image 1 there is a good light on the front face of the towers but the northern sides are also well lit at this time of day. The shadows add some depth to the architecture. The overall warm glow of the early light is something I find very appealing.
Image 2 Early Morning / FORM |
Taken from the same viewpoint as Image 1 but slightly later in the
morning. In image 2 the shadows across the north facing walls have added a contrast
to the nicely lit facades in the sun. The overall colour, whilst
obviously the same in real life, appears much cooler as the sun climbs
higher in the sky.
Image 3 Early Morning / TEXTURE |
Image 3 has been taken from the opposite direction to Image 2 at a similar time of day. The light has yet to reach the south facing walls and I like the contrast between these and the eastern walls bathed in sunlight.
Image 4 Mid Morning / FORM |
I pondered the inclusion of a high contrast black and white image, and
have decided to include it. Image 4 isn't a greyscale conversion, I shot
the original in mono. Shot a little later in the morning than image 2, I
like the mix of shadows and light on the south facing walls.
Image 5 Late Afternoon / TEXTURE |
Image 5 was taken late afternoon and is a close up to highlight the fine detail of the bridge towers. The low sun has given the image a warm feel and a nice even light, highlighting the texture and detail of the stonework.
Image 6 Sunset / SHAPE |
The sunset Image 6 taken from the
Northeast has produced a nice silhouette with sharp edges and a nice
highlight on the edges of the rings. On this occasion it was actually
TOO clear a day, a few clouds would have been nice.
Image 7 Sunset / COLOUR |
Image 7 is the sunset image shot from the west. The bridge was very busy with traffic so I waited a short while until the road was in shadow. This image shows the colours of the rings to best effect.
Image 8 Dusk / COLOUR |
Image 8 shows the bridge some time after the sun has set but before the onset of night. A long exposure has blurred the people in the foreground.
Image 9 Night / SHAPE |
Image 9 taken at night. The light pollution gives an orange sky as opposed to the expected black. The floodlights are doing an excellent job of lighting the Olympic Rings.
ASSIGNMENT FEEDBACK
ASSIGNMENT FEEDBACK
Overall Comments
The choice of Tower Bridge as your
subject has opened up interesting possibilities for a variety of
lighting that changes throughout the day. Due to the scale of the
structure, what it doesn’t allow you to do is to experiment with
your own lighting ideas: Daylight conditions and the artificial
lights that are already there have prescribed the light on the
bridge.
The angle of the light (and of the
subject) to the camera can be experimented with when using a smaller
object. The environment (light, subject, backgrounds etc.) can be
controlled, almost at will, allowing greater flexibility and
creativity in what can be produced.
I can see the basics of each type of
lighting technique in the assignment. For assessment the images
should be labelled with the appropriate categories: Shape, Form,
Texture and colour (usually two images for each category). In my
feedback I’ll suggest which category/categories I think each image
illustrates.
The structure chosen is an iconic one
that is photographed endlessly by visitors. In this assignment you
have gathered together similar images under a variety of lighting
conditions. By showing these together, you have revealed the way that
a subject can appear markedly different depending on the lighting.
Further to this, you show how each type of lighting reveals different
aspects of the structure.
There is an appreciation of lighting in
this assignment that makes for spectacular rendering of the bridge.
This appreciation of light is far better than in previous
assignments.
In future, when you are considering
taking a photograph, you may well remember this assignment and the
effects of the lighting: Your camera position could be influenced by
the angle of the light, its direction, its colour, the time of day,
as well as by choosing which aspect of the subject is enhanced by the
light.
Assessment potential
I understand your aim is to go for the Photography Degree and that
you plan to submit your work for assessment at the end of this
course. From the work you have shown in this assignment,providing you
commit yourself to the course,I believe you have the potential to
succeed at assessment. In order to meet all the assessment criteria,
there are certain areas you will need to focus on, which I will
outline in my feedback.
Feedback on assignment
Technically this is your best
assignment so far. Even given the variety of lighting, your exposures
are consistently well controlled throughout. Composition and framing
will have been difficult as they’re largely determined by where you
can gain access. However you have managed to produce carefully
considered images that are largely well-balanced and free of clutter
or distractions.
When photographing large buildings,
they are easier to shoot from slightly further away, with a longer
focal length than you have used in the first three images. In these
images you are looking up, tilting the verticals, as well as
struggling to get the top included. They give the impression of
struggling to ‘get it all in’. The rest of the images appear more
considered and showmore of the context around the bridge.
I particularly like the inclusion of
the narrow-boat in the first image. It shows what the river was once
famous for; access to London along the river and as a port connected
to the sea. The semi-silhouette against multi-coloured reflections on
the water is particularly effective. I suggest it would be worthwhile
correcting the right-hand vertical so that it lines up with the frame
edge (select all>transform> skew, then crop).
Despite working with a fixed object,
there is still variety in your positioning and camera-to-subject
distances. The inclusion of the Olympic rings in some images has set
a definitive time-period and added to the interest of those images.
I think that the most successful images
are the ones that are either the classic post-card shots (such as
image 4) or those that include another subject or object, leading the
eye into the frame, such as the first image.
What is immediately apparent, even from
the first two images, is the difference that the light makes to the
colour of the bridge. Image 2 is probably the most ‘accurate’ in
showing colour balance, but image 1 shows how early or late sunlight
can enhance the natural warmth of the stonework.
Both images also show the form really
well: With direct light on two perpendicular sides, they appear
clearly three-dimensional. Contrast this with image 3 that has light
on only one visible side. Image 4 is again a good example of form.
Image 5 has the light directly from behind which doesn’t show form
or texture as well as if it had been shot earlier or later with the
light coming more from one side.Image 6 is a strong silhouette with
colour added by the setting sun. This shows the shape of the bridge’s
upper structure.
Image 7 again shows the effect of the
colour of low sunlight. It also shows the rings as having strong
colours. The colours are enhanced by the direct light in image 8.
This is complemented by the blue/magenta sky of dusk. I like this
position as it shows the context of the busy embankment, but the wall
in the foreground is a bit intrusive. A camera position to the right
(placing the end of the wall in the corner of the frame) or to the
left to exclude the wall might have been better.
Even though image 9 is at night, the
floodlights do show the colours off well, particularly of the rings.
Enough of the bridge is highlighted against the dark sky to show the
bridge’s shape too.
Learning Logs or Blogs
Don't forget to
update your log with any activities, plans and thoughts about your
work. Add also your research an thoughts on other photographer's work
that you've read about or seen online or in exhibitions. In
particular, relate your reflection and developing thoughts about what
you see to your own work.
In
your blog I can see reflections on your own work: after shoots, after
editing and after assignments. There are also some notes referring to
images in books.For assessment, it would be good to show more
evidence of viewing other photographers’ work; in books, online or
at exhibitions.
Suggested reading/viewing
I recommend
reading 'On Being a Photographer: a Practical Guide' by David Hurn
and Bill Jay. Also, look online at the image sequences in classic
photo-led magazines of the 1950s such as Picture Post. See the work
of photographers who have produced extended photo essays, such as W.
Eugene Smith.
Pointers for the next
assignment
More variety of scale would have helped
to vary the pace of the images in this assignment. You will need to
bear this in mind in assignment 5; narrative and pace are two
techniques that allow a sequence to flow, whilst retaining interest.
Assignment
5 will draw on the skills developed during all the previous
assignments: Using light, composition, concepts and colour. It is a
sequence of images that produce a narrative to tell a story in
pictures. The captions provide further information and add to the
development of the context. The style used for images and text is
similar to what you might expect to find in a magazine.
The
initial image should be simple and striking, grabbing attention,
persuading the viewer to look further into the sequence; as you would
expect in a magazine article. It is good to have some variety of
light, perspectives, scale etc. to keep interest in the story. What
you leave in the final edit is as important as what you cut out. A
photographic ‘story’ is best told directly, through images that
contribute to the telling of the story and/or add context to that
story.
Tutor name: | Derek Trillo |
Date | 12 October 2012 |
Next assignment due | 10 December 2012 |
Image 1 Sunrise / COLOUR |
Only one minor adjustment to make for this assignment, apart from the titles. Derek suggested using the Transform>Skew procedure to straighten the verticals in this image. Amazingly that is the first time I have used this technique and I'm very pleased with the result.
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